Tuesday, 29 November 2016


Money On My Mind
I heard my paper shuffling.
Like it was getting ready  to get painted!
My painting was already good I knew it was going to be perfect by the looks of it. I heard people saying it was awesome because of the good colours.

I wondered if my painting would be the best. Plus Not just some people in the class said it was good most of the people said it was amazing. I wondered if other people's art was better  than mine.
I saw the sweet suicide squad painting on My art. I saw people mixing colours it was bad to mix colours if you did your work  would look really bad. I Made 100,000 dollars in each painting.

I felt the paint slobbering on the paper. It looked     beautiful. And amazing. It wasn’t just dirty paint it was amazing paint. I made $999,999,999.
*The End*



By Ariel

2 comments:

  1. Nice Work Ariel, you have used good WOW words like slobbering. One way to make it better is to add more writing so more people would be interested to read it.

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  2. well down that's good and you have used wow words

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